Wednesday, August 22, 2007

daybreak



















mud white dawn
another summer day
replaced by glaswegian fall
I burrow back into sleep
dreams of warmth buried deep

8 comments:

Tumblewords: said...

mud white dawn - a lovely visual phrase - your poem is real as is the photo. Nice!

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Clare said...

Beautiful! I love the transition from summer to fall in this, and the photo is really nice too.
:)

Mandy said...

very good
I assume a glaswegian fall comes from an over-indulgence in the "half & half-pint"

Roswila said...

"mud white dawn: fabulous line!

Really nice tanka.

shadows and clouds said...

what a stunning photo and what gorgeous dreamy words! you're great tammy!!! big hugs! by the way, i'm back in post-holiday world, with computer again! hope all is well, hugs!

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